Blogging Friends.... I did it again. I composed yet another poem
about Robert Downey Jr., once again celebrating him being ten years drug-free
this month!! Why? Because I'm insane, or crazy, or obsessed with Robert Downey
Jr., or I really, really enjoy composing poetry.... Or I'm insane, or crazy, or
all of the above!! {Why, yes. I did mean to repeat the "insane or crazy" part,
lest anybody wonder!!} Also. I wanted to take on the challenge of composing
another poem in Roads' setup. Artsy. Different. With "Roads", the
first line has thirteen syllables, and its repeated line ten. There is a pattern going. That was done
quite by accident!! Thus, I wanted to attempt it on purpose this time around!!
Not just the result of a "happy accident". This poem is centered on
Robert Downey Jr.'s eyes. It's a "second chance" from one which I
composed last Summer. {Ironic? Perhaps just a bit!!} This poem was--for reasons
beyond my comprehension--more challenging to write than "Roads". On
one hand. I felt much more in control. But, on the other hand? It was daunting
to compose for several reasons!! A challenge was making this poem different from
"Roads". Then, about halfway through writing, I realized
something. It was not artsy enough!! So. I went back to correct that!! Unlike with "Roads", emotions
never washed over me. My biggest obstacle, actually, was Writer's Block!! Ah!!
But I love, love, love Writer's Block!! It was emotional to compose nonetheless,
even though my eyes never filled with tears. For inspiration, I Google-searched
images of Robert Downey Jr. young. Yes, young. I had some pictures in mind. The lower he
sank, the better for this poem. Yes, you read that correctly. The lower he
sank, the better for this poem. There was one specific picture which I had in
mind. Snapped during a court appearance. The year was--maybe--1996. Word of
experience. If you sincerely love Robert Downey Jr., do not make eye contact
with him in this picture. Why? Just trust me on this. No eye contact, okay? However.
This picture did inspire my poem's second two lines!! And it was followed by a
cosmic bout of Writer's Block!! Score!! After pounding those second two lines on this
black desktop computer keyboard, I silently bid the picture good-bye, and
thanked "him" for inspiring my poem {I am an oddball!! This I know!!}.
Yes, his eyes which then were filled with such despair and sorrow did inspire
my poem. Enough said. Then, after composing its final two lines, I pumped my fist!! In
sincere jubilation for Robert Downey Jr.!! The top line of this poem has twelve
syllables, and its repeated line nine. Okay. I am also reposting
"Roads", so that you can compare the two. Enjoy!! Do please tell me
which one you like best!!
Afterthought. My poetry is never traditional. I like that!!
I make--and break!!--my own rules. That is just how this born-to-be-a-rebel
rolls!! But one of the freedoms which comes with my approach is I can
experiment!! I love that part!! Oh. And I'll never look at Robert Downey Jr.'s
"Chocolate Diamond" eyes the same ever again!! Will you?
"Chocolate Diamonds"
Written on 7-23-13
They say that the eyes are the windows to the soul;
The eyes
are the windows to the soul;
Well, his reflected despair, and were sorrowful;
So much
despair, they were sorrowful;
As a "bad boy" he glared at cameras with those eyes;
He glared
at cameras with those brown eyes;
Reflecting a lost, lost, lost
addict in disguise;
Reflecting
an addict in disguise;
They say that the eyes are the windows to the soul;
The eyes
are the windows to the soul;
His now reflect such happiness that they twinkle;
Oh, such
happiness that they twinkle;
Like chocolate diamonds, his eyes glisten and sparkle;
With joy,
his eyes glisten and sparkle;
Now, they reflect one decade of living drug-free;
Yes, one
decade of living drug-free!!
"Roads"
Written on 7-18-13
My, he has an incredibly attractive smile;
An
incredibly attractive smile;
Which has travelled with him upon dark roads for miles;
For miles,
miles, miles and miles;
Wayward roads tampered by life choices, plus addictions;
Tampered by
life choices, plus addictions;
On such roads, his death was many people's predictions;
His death
was many people's predictions;
My, he has an incredibly attractive smile;
An
incredibly attractive smile;
Which has travelled with him upon sweet roads for miles;
For miles,
miles, miles and miles;
Ah, those dark roads which could have ended his film career;
Roads which
could have ended his film career;
He has now been drug-free for ten miraculous years;
Yes,
drug-free for ten miraculous years!!
10 comments:
They are both brill but if we were forced to choose chocolate diamonds for us. Bravo and well done. Have a tremendous Thursday.
Best wishes Molly
Molly....
Thank-you for the comment, Friend!!
"They are both brill but if we were forced to choose, chocolate diamonds for us. Bravo and well done.". Thank-you!! Score one for "Chocolate Diamonds"!! ;op
I like them both too but I like the Roads one better, it seems to symbolise his addiction and struggle with a career in the limelight.
Lynne x
Lynne....
Thank-you for the comment, Friend!!
"I like them both too, but I like the Roads one better, it seems to symbolise his addiction and struggle with a career in the limelight.". Thank-you!! Score one for "Roads"!! ;op
I agree with Molly. Have a chocolate diamond for yourself! LOL! I do like the poem too.
Finn....
Thank-you for the comment, Friend!!
"Have a chocolate diamond for yourself!". Crack. Me. Up!! ;-D
Thank-you!! Score two for "Chocolate Diamonds"!! ;op
Both lovely!
RYKER....
Thank-you for the comment, Friend!!
Both!! Why, thank-you!! Score one for both "Roads" and "Chocolate Diamonds"!! ;op
wow great poems girl! I think I'll vote "Chocolate Diamonds" :)
Ali....
Thank-you for the comment, Friend!!
"Wow, great poems girl! I think I'll vote 'Chocolate Diamonds'." Thank-you!! Score three for "Chocolate Diamonds"!! ;op
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